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Let me tell you about Kumamoto. Foods of Kumamoto are very delicious. Best of Kumamoto is Basashi. Basashi is Sashimi of a horse. My family likes Basashi. When we went to Kumamoto before, we bought it every time. And we ate it at our home. I can eat a lot of Basashi with rice. If I have to eat Basashi everyday, I can eat it everyday! And I want to eat it now.
Also there are a lot of places for taking a drive in Kumamoto. I take a drive with some seniors of my circle. For example I went to Mt. Aso, Mt. Hanaoka, Mt. Kinpo and Daikanbo. We can see a beautiful night view. It relaxes me. In the daytime, there are various stalls in Daikanbo. Best of a night view in Kumamoto is Mt. Hanaoka. I like seeing a night view. So I will go to Mt. Hanaoka again!
Moreover I like shopping very much. There are a lot of places for shopping in Kumamoto. Best of shopping places in Kumamoto is PARCO. I always go to PARCO for shopping. My favorite shops are PAGEBOY, Heather, LOWRYS FARM and RETRO GIRL. Clothes of these shops are very cute. I buy some clothes at shops each time. Now I want to go to PARCO very much. So I will go to PARCO in Summer sale with some of my friends and seniors. I love PARCO!!
Finally Kumamoto is very famous for clean water. Water in Kumamoto is very clean. I like drinking water. I bring water in my canteen everyday. Last year I went to a gorge in Kikuchi with my circle members. There was a lot of water and nature. Water in Kikuchi is very cold and clean. It made me relax. After that we played with water in there. I think Kumamoto is very luxurious because we can drink tap water in Kumamoto. I love water in Kumamoto. I want my family to drink clean water in Kumamoto.
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Okinawa

I went to Okinawa last summer. I went to there with my circle members. When we travel there, a typhoon came. So It rained continually.
We went to eat lunch at restaurant in Okinawa. We ate some Okinawa dishes. For example Goya fried with pork, tofu and other vegetables, Takorice, Okinawan noodles and a large bowl of rice topped with fresh seafood. It's very delicious.


Also we went to churaumi aquarium. There were a lot of fishes. And there is a big water tank. In this tank, there were many big fishes and sharks. It's beautiful. We took a lot of pictures.
After that we went to Kokusai street. We bought souvenirs for family and friends. I spent a great time!!
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Kumamoto

Let me tell you about Kumamoto. Foods of Kumamoto are very delicious. Best of Kumamoto is Basashi. Basashi is Sashimi of a horse. It's good with grated ginger.
My family like Basashi. When we went to Kumamoto past time, we bought it everytime. And we ate it at our home. I can eat a lot of Basashi with rice. If I have to eat Basashi everyday, I can eat it everyday! And I want to eat it now.
Also there are a lot of places for taking a drive in Kumamoto. I take a drive with my circle members. For example I went to Mt.Aso, Mt.Hanaoka, Mt.Kinpo and Daikanbo. We can see a beautiful night view. It relaxes me. In the daytime, there are various stalls in Daikanbo. Best of a night view in Kumamoto is Mt. Hanaoka. I like seeing a night view. So I will go to there again!!
Moreover I like shopping very much. There are a lot of places for shopping in Kumamoto. Best of shopping places in Kumamoto is PARCO. I always go to PARCO for shopping. My favorite shops are PAGEBOY, Heather, LOWRYS FARM and RETRO GIRL. Clothes of these shops are very cute. I buy at these shops each time. Now I want to go to PARCO very much. So I will go to there in Summer sale with some of my friends. I love PARCO!!
Finally Kumamoto is very famous for clean water. Water in Kumamoto is very clean. I like drinking water. I bring my canteen in water everyday. Last year I went to a gorge in Kikuchi with my circle members. There was a lot of water and nature. Water in there is very cold and clean. It made me relax. After that We played with water in there. I think Kumamoto is very luxurious because we can drink tap water in Kumamoto. I love water in Kumamoto. I want my family to drink clean water in Kumamoto.
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Kumamoto 4

Kumamoto is very famous for clean water. Water in Kumamoto is very clean. I like drinking water. I bring my canteen in water everyday. Last year I went to a gorge in Kikuchi with my circle members. There was a lot of water and nature. Water in there is very cold and clean. It made me relax.
After that We played with water in there!! I think Kumamoto is very luxurious because we can drink tap water in Kumamoto. I love water in Kumamoto!!
(85words, 4656words)

Kumamoto 3

I like shopping. There are a lot of places for shopping in Kumamoto. Best of shopping places in Kumamoto is PARCO. I always go to PARCO for shopping. My favorite shops are PAGEBOY, Heather, LOWRYS FARM and RETRO GIRL. Clothes of these shops are very cute★★ I buy at these shops each time. Now I want to go to PARCO very much. So I will go to there in Summer sale with some of my friends. I love PARCO!!
(79words, 4571words)

Kumamoto 2

There are a lot of places for driving in Kumamoto. I take a drive with my circle members. For example I went to Mt.Aso, Mt.Hanaoka, Mt.Kinpo and Daikanbo. We can see a beautiful night view. It relaxes me. In the daytime, there are various stalls in Daikanbo. Best of a night view in Kumamoto is Mt. Hanaoka. I like seeing a night view. So I will go to there again!!
(71words, 4492words)