Essay(revised)

Hello. Now I will tell you about my favorite animal. My favorite animal is a dog. I have a dog now. This dog is a beagle. His name is Leo. He is eight years old. He likes hot milk. When it was cold, I gave hot milk to him. He drank it joyfully. Also he likes to take a walk. When I was a high school student, I took a walk with him to the park near my house. We always ran until the park near my house. I live in Kumamoto by myself now. So I live separately from him. I was very sad. But he comes to me happily, when I will go home in holiday. I’m very happy when he comes to me. So my grandmother has always taken a walk with him. My grandmother likes dogs very much. Sometime she buys his refreshment break. Leo likes this one. He wags his tail when we give him some refreshment breaks and foods. I like him the charming figure. Also he likes swimming. When he takes a walk, he goes to the river. When he arrives at a river near my house, he looks very happy. So I want to go to the river for playing with Leo.
Leo came to my house when I was a junior high school student. My mother’s friend gave him to us. I wanted to have a dog before that time because I love dogs. So I was very glad when he came to my house. First he was very small and he was a young child’s short. So he was so cute! Now he attains his full growth. He is stronger than me now. But he is　sweet. For example, as soon as I go home from university, he greets me in front of the　entrance of my house. He barks at me for greeting every time. I think I love Leo again.　Last year I went to mountain near my house with him and my family. We marched in a　line with him. After a while time, he became missing. We called out “Leo!” several times.　But be was not in there. After a short time, he came to run with us. He likes to play in a　mountain. So he enjoyed playing in the mountain. In addition, when it was snowy, I took　a walk with him. He looked happy. He likes snow very much. Last year, I made a big　snowman by his house. I like to play with him and snow!　But he is sick now. He fights against cancer. He is not lively. I was very sad. I want to　play with him. I want to run with him. He doesn’t eat some dog foods. So I give him some breads and hot milk now. He likes hot milk, so he drinks it. I want him to get better his health　again as soon as possible. I believe he will recover his health!　Leo is sick now, but I love him! I love dogs!
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