Essay (revised)

My treasure is my family. My family is five, my father, mother, grandmother, younger sister and me. My father, Masaru, is a salesman. He works very hard for our family everyday. In Golden Week he did carpentry work. My house’sfloor was tatami. But it’s very old. So hu repaired it with wood flooring for three days. I think he served for our family again. I feel he is to be depended upon. My mother, Miharu, is an office worker. She works at Koransha. Koransha is a porcelain company. My town is Arita. Arita is famous for porcelain. So she works very busily during Toukiichi. Also she is good at cooking The dishes which she makes are very delicious. She makes a lot of various dishes everyday. However tired she is, she makes dishes. I respect her. My grandmother, Asae, is seventy years old. She is a healthy elderly person. She takes a walk to a dam near my house with our dogs twice a day. Moreover, she goes shopping at the next town by bicycle. I want to be a healthy senior like her. My younger sister, Yuumi, is a high school student. She attends Takeo HS in Saga. There is a lot of homework in her school. So she studies very hard everyday. Also, she is a member of the brass band club. She plays the trombone She makes an everyday. Recently she is very busy. But I want to go shopping and karaoke with her. I’m looking forward to playing with her!! We have had a dog since I was a junior high school student His name is Leo. He is a beagle. Beagle is model as character of Spoopy. He is very cute. He likes milk. He was small when I met him for the first time. But he becomes big and strong. He likes running and playing in the river. I want to live for a long time for my family.
This is my treasure.
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