A Present for Mum

Dad had a little box.It was a present for Mum.Dad had an idea.He wanted to make Mum laugh.Mum gave Dad a present.Dad gave Mum a big box.Mum had a smaller box."What is it?" she asked.The present got smaller...and smaller...and smaller."This is for you," said Dad."And this is for you," said Mum."Oh Dad!" said Mum."Oh Mum!" said Dad.

I think Dad is very kind and pleasant person. My favorite point is last. Mum bought a ring and Dad bought a same ring!! It's surprise!! They think to buy a same present. They are good couple!! The box was by Chip's bed. Something was glowing inside it. Chip looked at the box. "It's magic," he said. Chip ran into Biff's room. "Biff," he called. "Look at the box". They opened the box. They looked inside. "It's magic," they said. A key was in the box. The key was glowing. "It's magic key," said Biff. She picked up the key and the magic again. Biff and Chip got smaller and smaller and smaller. "Oh help!" saib Biff. "It's magic," said Chip.
They became small persons. Everything looked big. They found a house. She pushed and pushed, but she couldn't get in. When something was coming, I was tense. But it's a small mouse. It's cute!! After that Biff and Chip got bigger and bigger and bigger. This story is very adventure!!
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