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Let me tell you about Kumamoto. Foods of Kumamoto are very delicious. Best of Kumamoto is Basashi. Basashi is Sashimi of a horse. My family likes Basashi. When we went to Kumamoto before, we bought it every time. And we ate it at our home. I can eat a lot of Basashi with rice. If I have to eat Basashi everyday, I can eat it everyday! And I want to eat it now.
Also there are a lot of places for taking a drive in Kumamoto. I take a drive with some seniors of my circle. For example I went to Mt. Aso, Mt. Hanaoka, Mt. Kinpo and Daikanbo. We can see a beautiful night view. It relaxes me. In the daytime, there are various stalls in Daikanbo. Best of a night view in Kumamoto is Mt. Hanaoka. I like seeing a night view. So I will go to Mt. Hanaoka again!
Moreover I like shopping very much. There are a lot of places for shopping in Kumamoto. Best of shopping places in Kumamoto is PARCO. I always go to PARCO for shopping. My favorite shops are PAGEBOY, Heather, LOWRYS FARM and RETRO GIRL. Clothes of these shops are very cute. I buy some clothes at shops each time. Now I want to go to PARCO very much. So I will go to PARCO in Summer sale with some of my friends and seniors. I love PARCO!!
Finally Kumamoto is very famous for clean water. Water in Kumamoto is very clean. I like drinking water. I bring water in my canteen everyday. Last year I went to a gorge in Kikuchi with my circle members. There was a lot of water and nature. Water in Kikuchi is very cold and clean. It made me relax. After that we played with water in there. I think Kumamoto is very luxurious because we can drink tap water in Kumamoto. I love water in Kumamoto. I want my family to drink clean water in Kumamoto.
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