Dad's Grand Plan

I was time to go. Dad's Grand Plan had worked. Nothing had gone wrong. "There's still time," whispered Chip. Mum drove the car. Kipper was fed up. He didn't want to sit in the middle. "You can take turns," said Mum. Kipper was hot. He began to moan. "Can we stop for a drink?" said Chip. "No," said Dad. !It will make us late." Kipper wanted to change seats, but Dad didn't want to stop. "Maybe we should," said Mum. "Yes, we are all thirsty," said Biff.

This Dad was very fun. Mum saw a place and stopped. She looked in the back of the car. "Where's Floppy?" gasped Mum. "We can't have forgotten him!" But it was true. I was very surprised. They had forgotten Floppy. "We'll have to go back for him," said Mum. "So much for Dad's Grand Plan," said Biff. I think they were late, but Mum drove fast. "Slow down, Mum," said Kipper. "I feel sick." There was a bump. A bag had falled off the roof rack. Mum stopped the car. The bag was in the road. It had come open. There were clothes everywhere. I think that he was scatterbrain. So Dad's socks were in the road, his shirts were in the hedge and his pants were in a tree. I laughed, and the children couldn't help laughing. At last they got to the holideay cottage. But Dad unlocked the door. So everyone wen to inside. Furthermore a black bird was in the room. "It's a crow!" Then they had to clean up in the room. That's a very fun.
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